holy- okay, here, have my improvements and character developments of Lilli over the past year, when I first made her to now well then dghsgfjhsfgkfdhg more no pen pressure work yay -- Lilli is miiiine art is miiiine world is miiiiine
I think it's a grat drawing showing how much you have improved and this is a huge difference from 1 year ago, but of course there is always room for improvement my only major thing about this is the chin seems a little pointy and kind of low down if you we're to smooth it out it would be all the more amazing and I'm not as good as I think but I believe that is something that could pointed out but like I said other then that this is fantastic and you have real talent I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~AH
Wow this is great! At first glance I can see a world of a difference in everything!!! You did a wonderful job improving hair, and just really everything!
This is going to be a short critique (like half the size of my normal monster ones!) but I must say I am dumb founded by the improvement!
Positives: You really seems to develope a style! The first pic almost seems mimicky, but the second one looks hard worked! You got great flow on her hair, and very slim and cute shoulders!
Negatives: As I see you pulled off such improvement now I can only imagine how much you can improve by maybe even December 2013! I see you are going quite along the lines of an anime like style, so what I say is based off of that but your style is up to you ;v;
Maybe shrink the chin a little bit? It is quite jutty and sticks out apart from the pic. At first glance it could be a bit distracting. The neck is also some what coming from the side of her face? Maybe make it not so much of an hour glass shape and place it a bit more to the back of her head? Not to mention smooth out your lines a little more, and maybe start working with various colored shades rather than black and white?
Besides those few little things, you did a wonderful job!
woah this is so cool it's weird how during the time with the scribbly drawing i could draw better than that scribbles cause i was actually an artist already back then, (like realistic sketches ALREADY ) bit now you like CAUGHT UP AND GOT BETTER THAN ME HAHAHAHAHAAAAAIIIEEE. I'm so proud of you :3