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improvement and character development memee by windexter improvement and character development memee by windexter
holy-
okay, here, have my improvements and character developments of Lilli over the past year, when I first made her to now
well then
dghsgfjhsfgkfdhg more no pen pressure work yay
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Lilli is miiiine
art is miiiine
world is miiiiine
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:iconarcanine1999:
I think it's a grat drawing showing how much you have improved and this is a huge difference from 1 year ago, but of course there is always room for improvement my only major thing about this is the chin seems a little pointy and kind of low down if you we're to smooth it out it would be all the more amazing and I'm not as good as I think but I believe that is something that could pointed out but like I said other then that this is fantastic and you have real talent I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~AH
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Wow this is great! At first glance I can see a world of a difference in everything!!! You did a wonderful job improving hair, and just really everything!

This is going to be a short critique (like half the size of my normal monster ones!) but I must say I am dumb founded by the improvement!

Positives:
You really seems to develope a style! The first pic almost seems mimicky, but the second one looks hard worked! You got great flow on her hair, and very slim and cute shoulders!

Negatives:
As I see you pulled off such improvement now I can only imagine how much you can improve by maybe even December 2013! I see you are going quite along the lines of an anime like style, so what I say is based off of that but your style is up to you ;v;

Maybe shrink the chin a little bit? It is quite jutty and sticks out apart from the pic. At first glance it could be a bit distracting. The neck is also some what coming from the side of her face? Maybe make it not so much of an hour glass shape and place it a bit more to the back of her head? Not to mention smooth out your lines a little more, and maybe start working with various colored shades rather than black and white?

Besides those few little things, you did a wonderful job! :heart:
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shaina773 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is so amazing! <3 Soo much improvement! I love how you do eyes and hair :3
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Shaina <33
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shaina773 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem!
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p-i-c-k-l-e-s Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
holy akhjsdfl
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hsjfdhsgkjfdhg what
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p-i-c-k-l-e-s Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
just

asdhfkj

so much

improvement
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dfjkhsfksg right?
this is like
overwhelming
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p-i-c-k-l-e-s Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
asjdhf

yes
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SparkleStudiosDC Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
woah
this is so cool :D
it's weird how during the time with the scribbly drawing i could draw better than that scribbles cause i was actually an artist already back then, (like realistic sketches ALREADY :P) bit now you like CAUGHT UP AND GOT BETTER THAN ME HAHAHAHAHAAAAAIIIEEE.
I'm so proud of you :3
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Dogsnacks Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Improvement XD <3 try to keep the chin a little smaller ^^
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sherbi Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
EHHEHEGRKJHJSKDFHHL
WHOAH
YOU
ARE
AMAZING NOW
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
what
lolno
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alpha-centaurius Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asdfghjkl

SO MUCH IMPROVEMENT!
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
dhfjkdhgkdg
i'm happy
thaaank you
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XxEllieDaWolfxX Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow
You improved a lot!^^
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
tank you ellie <33
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XxEllieDaWolfxX Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Np nan!^^
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Cosmo-Creations Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg
so much
IMPROVEMENT
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg
right//shot
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KiwiKuma Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So much improvement ;v;
Amazing job Nan.
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Miss-RinRin Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
amg
just
Lilli on the left is all leik, "HEYYYY. WASSAPPPPP? DERP!"
And Lilli on the right is all like, "Hi!!!"
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windexter Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg
right?
it's just like
ew no
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clov01 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
tip! onthe new one smaller chin.
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